My name is Marisa. I am a year 7 at Mahana School and i like gymnastics.
Hi, Missy. I like your writing! I especially like the line that says, "I feel the rain coming down on my skin." I hope it wasn't too cold.
Hey Missy. Well done for getting your avatar on your profile. I look forward to reading more on your 'About Me' page.
kia ora Missy.I like how you made it sound like the kids are having a good time without actually saying that they had a good time.