Wednesday, 1 March 2017

Swimming at Rabbit Island

I see the kids running down the beach
 to get in the water.

I hear the kids screams when they run down to get in  the water.
Everyone is making a big splash.

I feel the rain coming down on my skin.
It made me wet.




3 comments:

  1. Hi, Missy. I like your writing! I especially like the line that says, "I feel the rain coming down on my skin." I hope it wasn't too cold.

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  2. Hey Missy. Well done for getting your avatar on your profile. I look forward to reading more on your 'About Me' page.

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  3. kia ora Missy.
    I like how you made it sound like the kids are having a good time without actually saying that they had a good time.

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